I will share the writing journal template and previous assignment docs and professor comments too based on prof feedback be sure to correct all the mistakes in previous task check out the rubric before submitting the assignment

For this assignment, you will first download the Writing Journal template located in the Course Information area of Blackboard. Then, you will write a correction of Writing Task 1 and Writing Task 2. The corrections should be based on your instructor’s feedback. In addition, you will record information and a reflection about your most common grammatical error which appeared in your assignments several times from the time you submitted Writing Journal 1 until this moment.

Be sure to correct all the mistakes in your Writing Tasks,

Comments by Professor: You made a good summary, but you need to watch your word choices and check some spelling and grammar mistakes, see my feedback in text.

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ELP 81 Language Structure

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Date: 01/05/18

I said/wrote: You should to work hard if you want to succeed.

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TOOLS OF PERSUASION

There are different persuasion tools used afferent form of conversations, especially in a brand advertisement. From one of the best and most famous Coca-Cola commercial, a song features as a persuasion tool. The song, brother by Avicii, is used in the song to illustrate how brothers’ sand for each other. Alongside with an illustration, two brothers are used and featured together everywhere and in anything they do. The order brother molests the younger ones in a way, but n an instance when he finds him being molested by other boys, he immediately stops it. This is where the older brother stops other boys from snatching a Coca-Cola from his brother. This action is used as a tool of persuasion whereby Coca-Cola identifiers it’s brand as one which people compete to have. Here, they persuade consumers to grab a cola whenever they come across it. Just like this stranger boy, they had to snatch it from a boy who seemed not to realize the value of the drink he was having. Therefore, the song identifiers Coca-Cola as a brand that is always with you, wherever you are and in whatever you are doing. Everywhere these brothers were there was a Coca-Cola nearby, which is product placement. Therefore, the company promotes their drink as one that can be shared among family members and even by individuals. In the end commercial, Coca-Cola again brings back the molesting nature of the bigger brother. However, this form of persuasion is to express the joy that is associated with Coca-Cola, although the older brother had mistreated his mat, they both laugh at each other. This is a form of persuasion that identifies Coca-Cola as a drink that one can have and enjoy good moments all the time.

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This video commercial is retrievable from

Writing Task – 01

Wayne Enterprise

Wayne enterprise is a major corporation that employs many people each year. I got free working for Wayne for a long time. The company deals with different marketing brands. I, therefore, have the opportunity to work with the team. Companies offer online marketing to various brands. It also conducts physical marketing where the employees visit different places to market brands as well as the services provided.

I was pleased to join one of the best teams. The team manager is amiable, and one gets an easy time to perform their tasks. The better thing with our team is that we can always take a break since the work is tedious. We make different suggestions as well come up with solutions to various problems. For instance, in my case, I like contributing a lot. I love speaking a lot, which makes me relate well with the customers (Pride & Ferrell, 2004). I have been talkative since I was young, which makes me an extrovert. Marketing requires someone who understands the language of the people and knows how to read their minds. In my field, I can interact with several people as well as convince them to take our brands. I have been awarded several awards, the first one being an employee of the year. My work has been accepted by many giving me numerous credits. I have also earned the company a better reputation. Currently, the company is still conducting its daily operations. I was also promoted to a marketing manager. I am, therefore, able to guide my fellow employees as I treat them with much respect. It is always good to be an ethical leader who understands other employees better.

References

Pride, W., & Ferrell, O. C. (2004). Marketing. Cengage Learning.