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20 ACA module
2 x
by Anchinalu Mehari
Submission date: 20-Jan-2020 08:27PM (UTC-0500)
Submission ID: 1
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File name: A.M_HCA320_ACA_module_2 x (25.62K)
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A.M HCA320 ACA module 2 x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Submitted to Wilmington University
Student Paper
www.aafp.org
Internet Source
Submitted to Aspen University
Student Paper
FINAL GRADE
/100
A.M HCA320 ACA module 2 x
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
PAGE 1
Comment 1
Anchinalu, this is not the right title page. Please do not submit your future papers unless you submit
with the right title page. I will not grade your paper int the future. The format is required by Aspen.
You have to learn how to adjust your page when you use PERRLA
Comment 2
Author Note goes here
Comment 3
Take this out
Strikethrough.
PAGE 2
Comment 5
Fix this spacing problem
Comment 6
Fix this spacing problem
Comment 7
This should be capitalized
Comment 8
Do not start a sentence with an acroymn
QM
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Comment 9
If you say studies, you have to cite more than one study.
Purpose Sentence Required
This is a good introduction, however you did not introduce the topics you will discuss. In future
papers please remember to state the purpose of your paper. Usually the purpose sentence is the last
sentence in the introduction paragraph, i.e. The purpose of this paper is to discuss advocating for
patients, articulate safe practices in nursing, outline how nurses can advocate for healthc
are
consumers, and discuss how roles change as policies change.
Comment 10
Fix this spacing problem please
PAGE 3
Comment 11
You only need to say Affordable Care Act and it is a proper noun so you have to Capitalize the first
letter in each word of the title
PAGE 4
Comment 12
You left off the period
New Paragraph
Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing
previously.
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are
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aware
Strikethrough.
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Comment 16
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from the hospital
Comment 17
I wouldn’t say this is a responsibility of the doctor.
Comment 18
to
Sentence Structure Error
This sentence needs to be re-written.
Comment 19
Perhaps social services should contact the patient. That’s what transition care nurses do
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Comment 20
Remember not to start sentences with the acronym
Comment 21
who are out of school
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26 years
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do not have to wait
Comment 24
Anchinalu, you have to remember to include the Conclusion section in your paper. Please set up
your paper correctly.
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Comment 25
Please format this page correctly. This should be double-spaced
Comment 26
None of your references are cited properly and you need the weblinks you retrieved these sources
from. I recommend that you take advantage of the Aspen Writing Center and the webinar videos
Comment 27
You need the weblink you retrieved this source from
Comment 28
You did not include your text book as one of the references
A.M HCA320 ACA module 2 x
by Anchinalu Mehari
A.M HCA320 ACA module 2 x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
A.M HCA320 ACA module 2 x
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
