Topic: Why communication is important in a relationship

Create an introduction and conclusion. Provide adequate support for each main point by citing at least three credible sources. Incorporate examples, narratives, testimonial evidence, statistics, analogies, explanations, and/or definitions where appropriate.

Once you have thought through each part of the speech (introduction, body, & conclusion), create a Sentence Outline of your speech  Your outline should show the full content of your speech and include a list of references in MLA format. 

Please see the attached document for the correct format and use the same format to make this.  

Persuasive Presentation Outline

Introduction

· Topic: Should children be raised by their grandparents? Why?

· Topic Introduction/Background: In the modern society, there are lots of parents are busy , do not like children, and in prison. So, many children are raised by grandparents.

· Thesis Statement: In my opinion, children should not be raised by grandparents because grandparents will spoil their grandchildren and spend lots of energy to take care children will have negative influence to older health. If the parents can give lots of money for grandparents taking care children, why they are not hire a people to do that thing?

Body

· Main Point (Argument)

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: older health will have be negative influenced by raising chlidern.

· Supporting Details: grandparents will suffer huge pressure from taking care their grandchildren. Their energy can not support them to raise a child.

· Supporting Details: Raising a child need spend lots of money. The older do not have many income and they need spend money to keep their health. So, It will make older sustain a huge economical pressure.

· Evidence (+ Citation): “Taking care of small children always need huge costs. When their retirement, older always enjoy peace life. It will break the organic life of grandparents. They do not have plan to raise a baby. Maybe, the economical problem will let them back to work.”(n.d.)

· Counterargument: Many older have a big annuity and their consume are very low. Moreover, parents of child will give some money for raising children. So, economical problem is not exist.

· Rebuttal: In fact, there are not many older have a good income when they are old. And older need spend lots of money to keep their healthy life.

· Main Point (Argument) 2: grandparents will spoil their grandchildren.

· Supporting Details: Actually, grandparents always will spoil children. Older man always rich, they will give the best to their grandchildren. It is not good for children growth.

· Supporting Details: The gift from the grandparents always better than parents and they will buy something which are children prefer. Such as video games, movies, and lots of snakes etc. All of these things will have negative influence to their children.

· Evidence (+ Citation): “The grandparent’s gift outshine the parent’s gifts and they buy expensive items for the grandchildren” (Susan ,2018).

· Counterargument: Some grandparents will help children to build the good habit. But they will not give some expensive things to their grandchildren.

· Rebuttal: In fact, there are lots of grandparents will spoil their grandchildren. They can not change their though and the way of their love children is different with the parents.

Conclusion

· Restatement of Thesis: there are two disadvantage aspects for grandparents should raise children.

· Summary of Main Points: The first disadvantage is that the children’s healthy will be negative influenced by grandparents bad habit. Besides, grandparents spoil their grandchildren.

· Concluding Statement: there are other disadvantages of children be raised by grandparents. Of course, there are also advantages. I believe that grandparents will accept new idea to take care of children. In the future, as the social economical development, people will have more time to take care of their children.

References

n.d. PROBLEMS OF GRANDPARENTS RAISING GRANDCHILDREN Retrieved from file:///C:/Users/zxd30/Downloads/IEPA%20041%20Persuasive%20Presentation%20Outline%20Example%201-1

Susan A. (2018). Do grandparents have the right to spoil grandchildren?

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