Find sample online and use 9 signs to explain what’s pseudoscience
and also alternative explanation
Psyc-110: Assignment 1 Model – Strong
Pavel Blagov PSYC-110-A
September 15, 2015
Earthing is Pseudoscience
In a recent post, the blogger known as Wellness Mama (2015), promoted âearthingâ as a
way of improving physical and mental health. She (assuming the author identifies as female)
invites consumers to purchase âearthingâ equipment, which runs a wire from a pad in the
personâs bed to a grounding outlet. The claim is that removing static electricity by means of
grounding would improve physiological functioning. Below, I apply Lilienfeldâs (2011) signs of
pseudoscience to demonstrate that âearthingâ is poor science, at best, and perhaps merely a scam.
Wellness Mama (2015) makes liberal exaggerated claims (one sign of pseudoscience)
about earthing. She refers to it as âthe most important health discovery everâ (Hello?
Vaccination? Antisepsis? Anaesthesia? Antibiotics?) and lists no fewer than 16 desirable effects
from it, most phrased vaguely, and ranging from âcan eliminate jet lag,â to âspeeds healing,â to
âreduces chronic pain.â Given that reputable sources deny the existence of a cure for jet lag, and
given the enormous monetary cost and human suffering incurred on society by chronic pain, the
claims by Wellness Mama are grandiose. Extraordinary claims require extraordinary evidence,
but the article contains very weak evidence in support of the claims, at best.
As evidence, the author presents mostly anecdotes, that is, her own experience with
âearthing.â Even if we assume she is sincere (and not merely pushing a product), we can explain
the subjective improvements in her sleep and well-being in ways simpler than âearthing.â
Perhaps she experienced the placebo effect, whereby people who expect a treatment to yield an
improvement end up feeling better even though the treatment was inert. Or perhaps she simply
happened to have a good day after she used âearthing.â Confirmation bias is suspect when
individuals start out by seeking evidence to support their a priori ideas as opposed to seeking
evidence to disconfirm them. My search for âgroundingâ and âearthingâ in scientific databases
Comment [PSB1]: Except for these two lines,
the paper is in Times New Roman, 12, with 1-inch
margins, double-spaced, and within the page limits.
Comment [PSB2]: Sources are cited in the body
of the text and referenced at the end of the paper.
Comment [PSB3]: This introduces and defines
the topic.
Comment [PSB4]: This is a thesis of the essay
(main idea), and it also serves as a roadmap
(prepares the reader to expect what comes next).
Comment [PSB5]: This is a good topic sentence
of a paragraph. Note also that the specific term is
being used (correctly; exaggerated claims) and that
it is made clear that this is one of Lilienfeldâs (2011)
signs of pseudoscience. By using this phrasing, you
are not only using the correct term, but you are
showing your professor that you know that this term
signifies one of the features of pseudoscience. Even
a reader unfamiliar with the book chapter would
understand what this is about.
Comment [PSB6]: This is a good concluding
sentence of the paragraph, which started with the
topic sentence and then provided support for the idea
in the topic sentence. This concluding sentence
further develops the idea in the topic sentence.
Notice that it also serves as a transition to the next
paragraph, which is about evidence.
Comment [PSB7]: Here, the author of the paper
(that is, I) should have made it clear that
âoverreliance on anecdotesâ is one of Lilienfeldâs
(2011) signs of pseudoscience. Because the rest of
the paper is quite clear, this omission probably
would not result in any âpenalty.â
Comment [PSB8]: Other concepts from the
course (not asked for in the assignment) are being
incorporated to show that the author has mastered
the course material.
Comment [PSB9]: Ditto
Blagov
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yielded a couple of articles published by the same pair of scientists, and no independent
replication. Those articles concerned blood flow and not the 16 claims made by Wellness Mama.
Thus, to the extent that any verifiable (not anecdotal) tests have occurred, they do not support the
claims, and the tests lack review by independent laboratories (another sign of pseudoscience).
A third pseudoscience feature is that âearthingâ theory lacks connectivity with other
sciences. Critics of âearthingâ have noted that the field of static electricity on the surface of the
skin cannot physically penetrate below the outermost cell layer. Safety regulations for working
with powerful electrical equipment permit exposure to strong fields because they are considered
safe (except when they induce heating of body tissues). If âearthingâ theory were correct, that
magnetic resonance imaging would cause severe health problems, whereas it is quite safe.
Wellness Mamaâs article contains âpsychobabbleâ (more precisely, âsciencebabbleâ); for
example, she refers to positive electrons (a physical impossibility) and to the âgrounding of free
radicalsâ (free radicals cannot travel over copper wire). She appears to be using random sciency-
sounding terms to lend credibility to the extraordinary claims.
Two of Lilienfeldâs (2011) signs of pseudoscience were not evident in the article (talk of
âproofâ instead of âevidenceâ and âlack of self-correction when contrary evidence is
publishedâ). Nevertheless, I believe the case is compelling that âearthingâ should not be taken
seriously, unless much stronger, non-anecdotal, peer-reviewed evidence emerges. In the
meantime, âearthing padsâ likely remain a very expensive placebo.
References
Lilienfeld, S., Lynn, S.J., Namy, L., & Woolf, N. (2011). Psychology: From inquiry to understanding, 2
nd
ed. Boston, MA: Allyn & Bacon.
Wellness Mama. (September, 2015). How to get healthy while you sleep. Blog entry retrieved from
http://wellnessmama.com/5600/earthing-sleep/
Comment [PSB10]: You are not necessarily
expected to do this. I did it here because it is
relatively easy for me to look up the scientific
literature on nearly any topic. After you take PSYC-
220: Research Methods in Psychology, you will
know how to do this as well. For the purposes of this
assignment, you are not expected to go into the
research literature databases and search for
information. But feel free to use reputable online
sources, e.g., websites by such professional
organizations as the Association for Psychological
Science, or the American Medical Association, or
major professional organizations (not
pseudoscientific ones, though).
Comment [PSB11]: Notice how the paper keeps
going back to the signs of pseudoscience, because
this is what the assignment calls for.
Comment [PSB12]: This is actually the âfourthâ
feature. Anecdotes didnât get counted earlier. Thatâs
fine. You wouldnât get penalized for minor errors
like this, as long as the writing is strong and the
content is meaningful.
Comment [PSB13]: Be careful if you write like
this. This smells like plagiarism. I referred to
âcriticsâ but did not cite and reference any sources.
Bad Pavel! Donât do this. Cite and reference your
sources. I will only suffer from remorse, but, in your
case, your grade may suffer if you do not cite and
reference your sources.
Comment [PSB14]: This last paragraph did not
explain that âpsychobabbleâ is one of the signs of
pseudoscience. I think itâs clear from the flow of the
argumentation so far, but you may want to be clearer
in your own papers.
Comment [PSB15]: This would be a more or
less classic concluding sentence/concluding
paragraph of an essay. It mostly restates the main
idea, but it phrases it in a new way and provides
some advice (e.g., what research needs to be done in
the future, and on what not to waste your money.)
Comment [PSB16]: Always cite your sources in
the body of the text AND reference them at the end
of the paper.
Blagov
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Concerns an appropriate topic. Correctly
identifies and illustrates 3-4 signs of
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concepts are used correctly.
Concerns an appropriate topic. Correctly
identifies and illustrates 2-3 signs of
pseudoscience. Addresses most signs
listed in class or in the textbook. May
contain one slight conceptual error, but
responses are not overly vague.
Topic appropriateness is questionable.
Identifies some signs of pseudoscience but
does not illustrate them (or vice versa).
Whether the student understood the
concepts is hard to evaluate, or there are
multiple small errors.
Questionable topic appropriateness.
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been used, but it is hard to evaluate
whether they were used correctly, or
writing is common-sense without using the
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structure, i.e., most have a topic sentence
and/or a transition, and most paragraphs
are cohesive.
The writing itself is cohesive but overall
structure is minimal. Minimal or no use of
topic sentences and/or transitions. The lack
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errors surrounding the vernacular or
terminology.
Lapses into informal language. Shows little
effort to emulate the style of the readings or
the model. Major wording errors in the
vernacular or terminology.
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construction. The writing has a rushed
quality, as if no proofreading took place.
Confuses plurals and possessives (e.g.,
confuses it’s with its, etc.).
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grammar mistakes and/or multiple
carelessness in sentence construction
interfere with reading. The writing has
unprofessional or unfinished quality.
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