A.M HCA 320module
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advocacy x
by Anchinalu Mehari
Submission date: 13-Jan-2020 11:57PM (UTC-0500)
Submission ID: 124173
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A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Comfort Nsiah, Mate Siakwa, Jerry P. K.
Ninnoni. “Registered Nurses’ description of
patient advocacy in the clinical setting”, Nursing
Open, 2019
Publication
nursingworld.org
Internet Source
Submitted to Aspen University
Student Paper
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov
Internet Source
www.questia.com
Internet Source
Submitted to Grand Canyon University
Student Paper
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FINAL GRADE
/100
A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy x
GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
PAGE 1
Comment 1
Your title page is not formatted correctly. Please fix this before the submission of Assignment 2. Use
the resources I email at the start of class as a guidel
PAGE 2
Comment 2
Do not write Introduction here. This should be the same title that is on your Title page and should not
be bolded
Strikethrough.
Purpose Sentence Required
This is a good introduction, however you did not introduce the topics you will discuss. In future
papers please remember to state the purpose of your paper. Usually the purpose sentence is the last
sentence in the introduction paragraph, i.e. The purpose of this paper is to discuss advocating for
patients, articulate safe practices in nursing, outline how nurses can advocate for healthcare
consumers, and discuss how roles change as policies change.
Additional Comment
This introduction is tool long for a 1500-2000 word count paper.
Comment 4
This Level 1 Heading should be written using both upper and lowercase:
Nurses and Safe Practice
Comment 5
This is not presented appropriately.
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Additional Comment
Anchinalu, please paraphrase the words of authors and provide a proper citation.
Comment 6
My Role in Advocacy
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Strikethrough.
Comment 9
You are repeating the same thing you have already stated
New Paragraph
Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing
previously.
PAGE 5
Comment 10
If you learned this from Chapter 2, you must cite the textbook here
Comment 11
Did you leave a word out
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Did you leave a word out
New Paragraph
Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing
previously.
Comment 12
How do your know this? A citation here would show the reader that what you are saying is credible
New Paragraph
Here you should start a new paragraph. You have changed the main subject you were discussing
previously.
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Comment 13
How I See Patient Advocacy in the Near Future
Comment 14
patient
Comment 15
This sentence should be rewritten
Comment 16
I am not sure what the second trend was
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Comment 17
Please fix this spacing problem
Comment 18
Good conclusion. In your conclusion just summarize the key points you have already discussed in
the body of your paper. You do not have to state what you believe, just the facts from the topics you
discussed.
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Comment 19
Please fix this spacing problem
Comment 20
Registered nurses’
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Advocating for nurses and nursing.
A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy x
by Anchinalu Mehari
A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy x
ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy x
GRADEMARK REPORT
FINAL GRADE
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
