Session Long Project: Working on a Negative Letter

Dear Ms. Ambrose, Thank you for allowing me to ponder your contingency.  I went aggravate your finishs, which you gave in the 5th day of May 2008.  I saw that you are 16 years old, a disequalize of noble nurture through ordeals conducted by the General Education Development (G.E.D.) in February 6, 2007, and has wined 15 semester school hours at the New Jersey City University on the leading semester of S.Y. 2007-2008.  It is as-well-mannered implied close, in the finishs that you submitted on May 5, that you scored a amiable 71 on your Armed Services Vocational Aptitude Battery (ASVAB) ordeal, which should win you the straight to invade the U.S. Navy close and then, specially that you are encircling to shape 17 years old this hereafter month. When I took your contingency to the employment-post on the 8th day of this month, the quantity semblance that, for the out voting of 2007-2008, G.E.D. disequalizes bear assiduous up the 5% equitable applicants merely this elapsed week or specifically in April 30, 2008.  You bear finishd your entreat of contact in the 5th of May 2008, but you get stagnant get the fortune to finish intermittently, past we are constantly public to applicants who are geting to add and propel an agreeable walk.  We should hold, notwithstanding, for the direct set of out votings, which should be exhibited by August 2008.  By then, you should bear shapeed 17 years old, delay no discuss for not entity veritable in the navy. If you failure, I can transmit another contact to you uniformly the door is public intermittently for out voting applicants.  That get merely choose encircling 2-3 months from now, which is merely a dwarf era, as compared to the enormous opportunities that you get be having for the subjoined years afore.  I am unmistakable that you get bear no problems by then, specially if you win past semester school hours, which you can stagnant choose in these three months that you bear.  For the meantime, it would be best to hold for the direct achievement, which should reach this August.  This can be an turn to get meliorate lasting, which should mirror well-mannered-mannered-mannered in your uphereafter finishs. Good achievement and see you intermittently this August. Sincerely, _________________ SH1 (SW/AW) Jermaine Moore United States Navy Recruiter NRS Bossier City, Louisiana The principles The principles that were used in creating the missive overhead are for-the-most-portio from the proviso of Joel Bowman (2002) of Western Michigan University.  I balmy to be as argumentative and believable as I can be, delayout getting too exact, so that the unraveler get impress the moment of the missive writer (although not very moving).  I balmy to denote that what I was relaying to her was button very mournful or sad owing another set of out votings should reach by the subjoined 2-3 months. The missive mirrored that what was happening was for the best of twain the writer and the unraveler—a win-to-win situation—and level if the applicant’s entreat for advent has been robbed, tclose are other opportunities in the coming, which the writer would be affable to notice the unraveler.  I balmy to semblance that the levelt was discussable and fairly-deduced, delay the guile of subsidy the unraveler some choices that rule acceleration in her getting veritable in the direct turn. This is to liquidate for the imperfection, which makes the missive forward-looking (instead of backward-looking), motivational, and not very denying to unravel.  It makes the unraveler exhibit that the missive does not veritably denote discountenance or exclusion but past of a past turn.  I balmy to minimize the impression by obscure to purpose out that the turn is not lost but would end intermittently in the months afore. The portios Following the Nursing Dissertation of Bowman (2002), the missive that was presented is right of the subjoined: (1) The ‘pace’ portioicipation that, in this missive, dictates the gratitude of the writer for allowing him to ponder the contingency, as well-mannered-mannered-mannered as the knowledge that the writer has current momenting the contingency.  (2) The ‘lead’ portioicipation that dictates the greater adventure that has led the writer to originate a missive for the unraveler, which should embody the denying missive that is the discuss for filing the denying missive.  In this missive, it mirrors that G.E.D. applicants were veritable merely until April 30, 2008.  (3) The ‘blend outcomes’ portioicipation that changes the propensity of the missive from denying to substantial; it shapes the missive from backward-looking to forward-looking.  In this missive, this portio says that the unraveler get get the fortune to finish intermittently by August of the similar year.  Finally, (4) the ‘motivate’ portioicipation, which dictates why the choice would aid and utility the unraveler, delay the resolution to exhibit aid and elevate amiablewill; this presents the discuss on why the missive is not perfectly denying, as it presents past substantial opportunities that exhibit the unraveler some utilitys. 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