Need help fixing grammatical error for personal statement. Quick work and easy

Need help fixing grammatical error for personal statement. Quick work and easy

There is no word limit. Please feel free to change vocabularies (strong vocab)and condense or cut any paragraph if necessary. I want to make sure the structure is easy to follow and get to the point I want to express. Feel free to adjust anything on this paper. Thanks in advance.

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