Posted: October 27th, 2022
Please open the Word document and find instructions for revising an email. Your goal is to improve it by making it more professional. This may be by checking spelling, grammar, content, etc. There is no “right” answer. If your edited version is better than the original, you will get full credit.
See original message below. Anything highlighted should be revised. Save this document and rewrite the message below, using more professional communication and considering the context.
Original message:
To: melinda.pereda@my.tccd.edu
From:
LovelyChica1823@hotmail.com
Subject:
HELP!!!!
Time:
9:25 a.m. (pretend this is for a 9:30 a.m. course)
Message:
My car broke down and i dont have a ride i know theres a test today but there is no way i can get to campus what can i do????
Write your revision below:
To: melinda.pereda@my.tccd.edu
From:
Subject:
Time:
Message:
Place an order in 3 easy steps. Takes less than 5 mins.